You need a working preloader/play button/replay button. In that order.
Besides that, it was a pretty nice start to the series... Looking forward to more!
going to watch next part!!!
Thought I'd watch something I'm not really into. I felt it was missing plot, but I loved your character design. Very unique (in a good way). I'll be checking out your later work.
i don't know what to say
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Heh ok well it was great to see this, the music was great, and the design of the char's are cool aswell, could have some backrounds though, but anyways nice work...