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Lost in "Clanky's Town"

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Lost in Quotes Clanky's Town

that was cool how you made them run

I can clearly see you got some animation talent here. I assume you've been doing animations before this submission came on here, but we got some problems. Both your intro and outro take up like 1/2 of the video, and the middle being the actual content. I recommend you at least cut out the Comedy Central logos because there is literally no reason to have them. Just a nitpick, but with your outro you should've made the words yellow or whatever color that wont be swallowed up by the background image. Because the black wording kept getting fused with the black outlines. Also the music should not be louder than the voice acting. I recommend Audacity if you don't have it. It's an audio program that will help amplify your voice acting. It's free so it should be no problem to get. And finally with the walk cycles; If I was you, I would've done whatever to animate walk cycles well. I wouldn't just give up on it, there is no excuse for it. Like I said, I think you got potential to making some great animations. You just need to improve, and I hope you do. Good luck!

geoonyt responds:

Thanks. And also, the first part of the intro was made by one of my friends and I didn't add the Comedy Central logo. I am also wondering why they made it so long but next time I will animate walk cycles.

Also, I've actually gotten better at plots, animation, voice acting and all that other stuff. I think you'd like my newer content. By the way, thank you for your comment! It's helped me notice my mistakes, considering I didn't see them at first. I have learned from them, and just wait until you see Episode 4, it's almost 6 minutes long as of right now!

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Feb 13, 2021
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