The intro was humourous...

but I wanted more animations! And try adding a play button to your flash, helps a great deal.

You might want to show what they're vaulting over.

Without the things they're vaulting over, it's missing something important IMO...

((( A TEST..........HUH )))

Hehhe well like the last reviewer, this shouldnt be used for testing, if its good its good if its not its not, ok well my review is that its decent, i like the colore change and i like the animation it was smooth...

~X~

Uh...well, y'see.

First of all. It's spelled 'explanation'. ;) Second...something like this shouldn't stay in the portal. It's awesome, what you can do with your art. I enjoyed the graphics, and saw some definite potential with it. I applaud your ability! Seriously!

The portal shouldn't be a platform for test-runs and half-assed pieces of flash. This has nothing to do with your ability as an artist, which you -know- is there. You've been told that. But you should have done something with the character, rather than just say, 'Uh...here you go. Look what I can do!' Yes, you can do that, and it's great. :) But...uh. Well. I dunno. I can't help but think it's a waste of space in the portal.

That being said: DO SOMETHING WITH IT! So many ideas flashed through my mind just with that short bit of animation, so DO something more with it. Huge potential there.

*shudder*

3D in flash is a pain in the ass! but for only 30 mins, that was pretty--- decent, just stick to 2D thou, that's what flash is about, and--- yeah,