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This is my first post on NG so I'm not really sure what to put right here. I decided to make this to test out the pressure pen on Flash and I thought it looked good enough to post. Any pointers would be greatly appreciated. Have a good day :)

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This is nice, but also very short! I feel like a soundless looping test animation like this would fit better as a gif in the Art Portal or in a compilation of other animations you've made.

While the lineart of the Flash brush is good, the animation of the character's main body appears stiff without the use of some easing in your motion tweens or incorporation of more frame-by-frame stuff.

Still nice for a first try, though. Good luck with your future Flash attempts.

Superbuchi responds:

I really appreciate your review, and I think all of your points were spot on. I think I'm going to post longer animations that I've already done while I work on something longer with sound. I'll try to use more frame by frame there and I'll put more easing in the tweens I do use. Once again, thank you for the review :)

Smooth animation.

nice little animation ... brings back memories but you can clearly improve ! :D
You are on a good way to do so !

The character design here is cool.

Credits & Info

Views
137
Votes
73
Score
2.14 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 20, 2021
12:21 PM EST
Genre
Action
Software
  • Flash
  • Swivel
  • Premiere Pro