Cool story, but the animation is stiff at some parts probably made without in-betweens, I know this from an amateur, could've been used Toon Boom to improve the animation by in-betweening or onion skinning and the timing and spacing, or TVPaint, The voice acting is subpar and the audio quality can be low at times, at least the art style is decent and the character developments are fine.
TRPL 5 Episode 3 | Spectacle (The Grubs Plight | part 3)
TRPL 5 is a Patreon funded 2d animated series created using adobe photoshop by Solomon Mars ( https://www.patreon.com/smars )
Episode 3 - Spectacle (The Grubs Plight | part 3)
Jeph, Sankofah and Mondo are investigating a Hunter bot that's malfunctioned and find themselves having to team up to fight an out of control Arkyne.
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I really like the setting and the unique designs for all the characters. Great job animating the mouth movements too, that must have taken time do it that consistently.
Cool story, and an interesting slate of abilities for each character. Great work!
I really like the colours and overall look of this cartoon, though the animation's minimalistic/stiff at some parts, but I have a hunch it's not gonna stay that way for long if enough people donate to your patreon ;)
As for the voice actors, well, their mike quality varies, so of course I'd look into leveling their audio levels a bit, as I feel that would be the best solution for now (sometimes the voices are a bit too quiet)
Keep in mind, that all of this is coming from an amateur, but I'm just trying to give advice as best as I can, anyone's welcome to correct me if I'm wrong.
Wacky and Fun! With Great Animation and Voicework!