This feels like you didn't write a script and you just kind of made it up as you went along. That, or you wrote a script and it's just incredibly repetitive. Bring up your point, make the point and move on. You ramble too much. It doesn't help that the topic you chose is too broad and doesn't add anything new to the table.
Also, the animated character looks really bad.
This is trying to be like a lot of things and it doesn't really succeed at any of them.