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My Inu-Saan Chapter 1 Prototype

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This is the first episode of the mini series called "My Inu-Saan"! An updated version of the episode will come soon with more stuff to do with Inu-Saan and a Japanese translation!


This game may have some references, jokes, and/or content that is inappropriate or not suitable for children under the age of 13. That will also explain why it's rated T lol


Music Sources: http://en.maoudamashii.com/music_bgm.html (EN) / https://maoudamashii.jokersounds.com/music_bgm.html (JP)

Music Used: Village08, Village01, Town25b, Acousic32 (JP Site)

Backgrounds: pexels.com

Some of the sounds and/or music was created by David McKee (VIRiX Dreamcore)

Artwork: Princess Kk(Some edits by Inu-Saan)

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I lovu

good

Your story could benefit from keeping consistent tensing. I suggest using active voice since the events are "happening" to the player. For example, "They would then pick the candy back up" changes to "They pick the candy back up..." and so on. Maybe get someone to proofread everything? Good luck~

Inu-Saan responds:

Got it! Thanks for the constructive criticism, human! I would also make an updated version of the game that fixes stuff like that and more stuff to do!

ur pc is slow

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Uploaded
Nov 7, 2020
6:46 PM EST
Software
  • Unity
Misc. Kit
  • Visual Novel Engine