Loading the saved game in the room (world 1) where the couples are loaded Elana in the upper-left corner, in the ether, multiple times. It was not possible to get her to load back on walkable terrain again for 3 attempts. I managed to get it to load correctly when in full-screen mode, but this failed previously, so I don't know what "fixed" the problem.
I got an "out of memory" error from Newgrounds while exploring the new rooms after all the NPC's were satisfied. It advised that if I am the developer, I should allocate more memory.
It seemed like the English translation became increasingly worse as the game went on. I saw frequent errors in spelling, grammar, and a few sentences that just made no sense at all. Some word choices are not good Spanish-English analogs. For instance, "ambience" is much more broad than "lighting". The words chosen for the menu buttons also need to be changed.
I thought the exposition was just the right length most of the game, but the dialog events that follow after satisfying all the NPC's in "Jane's World" are just TOO LONG! Please shorten it and others that fill more than a few paragraph spaces.
The mansion section was very frustrating because there was no way to remember which servants provided which services. The quest log for this section updated tasks for at least one character only after their questline was finished, and in the in-progress panel (not the "completed" panel), making it impossible to know what was already done. Similarly, because the "Inventory" button is non-functional, we can't keep track of what we have completed by looking at our items. This feature (or a consistently, correctly updating quest log), would have removed a lot of tedious guess-work.
The game would be better if NPC's consistently acknowledged what tasks have been completed and remind you (hint) what is left to be done for their storylines. Again, especially in the mansion section.
The Licorice Demon woman's eyes are black, the same as her skin...it doesn't look good, consider making her eyes normal colored (or a different color). Also, the flan-woman's shoulders look a little grotesque, please consider removing the flan plateaus from her shoulders, they look infected. I would have liked to see more black and dark-skinned characters. As of now, there is only one east-Asian woman in the game.
I want to praise the developers for exploring a variety of sexual fantasies without being horrible towards any of the participants and--by extension--any group, race or women in general. As silly as any premise for a porn game must be, I think this game is inventive and mature in its depiction of sex, especially the core loop of understanding and indulging partners' fantasies. Also, very well-drawn.