this was a trip. I love the concept and most of the execution. the style of art is very enjoyable, it made me imangage that these pictures were things that I had doodled on paper as im investigated the case. I also love the idea of and open-end, was she killed? did she slip? or did she jump? who knows?
I do have a few bits of constructive criticism tho, the biggest one, it's too short, just as I was starting to get into it iv run out of options to look into. to further simulate the whole "you are investigating this" a clue system would be awesome! You could implement either of these, a mixture or neither, I just think it would enrich the game or others like it. The first is the easiest but also kinda bland. In the text, for can look at certain parts could be highlighted or a different color. If you click on those you can gather that info. Once you have 2 or 3 related info parts you could unlock a new section of info. So on and so forth. The second would be harder to do but be more interactive. You could have 4 highlighter colors. red= murder green=acdent blue=suicide yellow=other info. Every word you highlight would be added to a list that could be used in a fake browser thing. You could add different keywords together to find websites, files, and other evidence. Some of it could be relevant, others not. At the home selection screen, there would be a file report option. It could show you how much of each evidence color you have gathered. Then you would pick what you think happened. There could be corresponding endings to each option.
Still this was a great game, I loved it! Keep up the great work, as you have a new follower! :D
ima tell u what i thnk happend tho :)c
i think that she was a happy kid, started dating her boyfriend who might be a bit messed up. he thought she was making to many friends and was terrified to lose her so he cut her off and started isolating her, making her depressed. she asked him for help and he got her pills, but the pills actually sedated her, another ploy to keep her with him. eventually she figured it out and was trying to figura a way out, when he came to visit her at work, she wasn't in so he went to her fav place, she confronted him angry about the lies and manipulation. he got angry and started yelling, she was scared and started to back away, she slipped into a puddle and fell over the edge. so my final verdict issss
the boyfriend committed voluntary manslaughter, as well as continued harassment and stalking charges towards Lisa.
hope im close uwu