Dave,,, Dave, dave, dave... So, I am trying to be nice here, I can see that you want to actually make a game and I don't want to discourage that. I am not exactly sure what you are going for or the kind of feedback you are hoping to get from this 'alpha' submission. But lets take that for starters, If we look at the game submission guidelines (https://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/terms-of-use/game-guidelines) In particular the following passage: "Your submission must not be a pointless "demo" or "preview" without any redeeming qualities." And if we look at the content submission guidelines (https://www.newgrounds.com/wiki/help-information/content-submission) in particular the following passage: "Unfinished works are best posted on Dumping Grounds. We have a variety of forums where you may share your link and solicit feedback!" It is pretty clear this is not the correct way to go about this with a game that is this unfinished. I think you will find forum feedback more directed and easier to work with plus you don't have to go through judgement, you can just ask for help/feedback and update the game as needed. When it is finally ready for actual play you can submit to the portal and you will likely get a much more positive response from people. It really is an all around win-win.

Keep working on it though Dave, it is slowly advancing.