great suggestion make your text readable at a rate that you can read it causally not where you can making it along with i'd suggest making alot more of a split from original content (clearly majora mask or generally power passing story it's alot better if you change what is going on to your own plot. the mask was given by no one in particular works when it is a random event more than if a queen controls what you do because it implies she did so, the her being incompetent due to poor sleep and silliness better hits if she is shown as being a good leader in the general eye. the fact you dedicate 5 seconds to pointing out the plot is pretty generic out of your 2;23 second "cartoon" slide show to be nice. 3.5 % of your cartoon is a joke at expense of the cartoon ruining the experience if you put more effort in. the packing time and returning for the map are wasted you could convey that in a few comic book like frames of your character moving away from the enterance to their homer then turning back with one shot of them grabbing the map over the ruined ending from doing so . i can see you put effort in but i can say improve highly ! 100% try to learn toon boom and make a character puppet you like and work from there imprive your story telling by absorbing more media and visiting tvtropes. other than that i can't say much more than make friends with some one that likes doing landscapes since it's clear you like doing character work.