Better than before, BUT...
A nice improvement from before, although I can tell that you put little to no effort into some areas... I'm getting at you about the grammetrical errors again. Hold down the SHIFT ket, then immidiently to its left, you'll find the magnificant wonder many of us call "the question mark."
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I can tell that you are pretty serious about this series, but for the love of Pete, could you express it a little more?