Hey! I REALLY like this game, and i would like to give my opinion on it. This will include constructive criticism, but i'm no professional, so take it with a grain of salt.
-Graphics are done very well
-Story (especially in the last half) is very well written, and captivating.
-Dialogue is written well
-A nice atmosphere (but i do have issues with which i will get to later)
Buuuut... The cons
-controls are sometimes wonky or confusing
-The atmosphere goes to hard, to fast. it doesn't leave much room for buildup
-Takes way to long to return to the place you were after death
Solutions (in my opinion)
For one, at the beginning, i would ease off of the dark atmosphere. I get that with how short the game has to be, that you have to get into it fast. But i believe that the game would be better if it TURNED dark, rather than starting that way. Second, make it an option to be able to skip dialogue, so it isn't as painful to sit through after you die. Or, if you want to keep the dialogue boxes longer, than make checkpoints more common. I timed how long it took me to make it from the checkpoint, to where i died. it was 6 mins 11 seconds. I would love to see that fixed. I honestly dont know what to do about the controls, i think that would more come down to programming.
I love the game, and i cant wait to see more of it! i know you prob wont see, but if you do, consider my points. Godspeed