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Everyone looks great.
The best part was the creativity you used to get these characters into situations where they'd either be nude or giving fanservice somehow. Great job on that. I have some issues, however. There are numerous instances of words missing letters for some reason and some of the pictures that are pure wide shots with no dialogue looked stretched. Plus, Helen Parr doesn't look quite right in that pose where she's got her arms crossed and eyes closed -- It looks like her eyelids should be closed fully but the whites of her eyes are still slightly visible. Nevertheless, I'm interested to see where this visual novel thing goes.
Wish I could DL it to my phone so I could play it. Won't let me play it in the browser.