its really creative cant wait for more
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update :spelling errors fixed
THIS IS just a demo , the full free Game is available now play it here :
https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/756342
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A story driven RPG set in the modern day...
You play as Ben Assour...an average second year high school student living what seems like an average high school life
But that quickly change as you progress in the game...
Discover the story of'' Milker''
(PS : press ''SHIFT'' while walking to run faster )
I personally enjoyed the story, it had me really invested. The only thing I would change (mainly for future updates or a sequel) is to remove all the fourth wall breaks that Ben always seems to do because it really destroys the immersion for me personally, but that just a nitpick. Overall great game and concept and I hope to see the story continue.
fouzi94 responds:
Hello , i'm glad you enjoyed it ..
The fourth wall breaks were something i wondered if i should leave there or not ,because they
only make sense after you finish the full game..
But since i haven't completed it yet , they feel out of place when you only play this ''prologue''...
Thanks for giving this game a try :)
I thought the scenario was really interesting but everything else is really bland. The schools map should've also been downsized/straight to the point. there's so much unneeded extra space in the hallways.
fouzi94 responds:
you have a point about the enviroment ...
I'm working on adding a fast travel option and filling the school..
Also the rest of the game will have parts that take you outside of the school
Thanks for playing the game
Atmospheric and interesting. The hints of secrets unrevealed had me enthralled. I can't wait for the rest of the story! My only small criticism is the spelling. There were some mispellings, which sometimes changed words' meaning.
fouzi94 responds:
I'll go through the dialogue again and fix what i find..
Thank you for playing this game
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