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Porcelain Problems

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Here's my junior piece for college! Next up, senior thesis!

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The end was very good D:

Too long, a lot of build up for really not that great a delivery. Try shortening the sequences leading up to the punchline, like any sequence that we are waiting for an extended period of time you are risking your ADHD audience clicking away from your movie.

Good job overall, loved the characters and the motion!

Funny

Seems to happen quite often, doesn't it?

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Uploaded
Apr 6, 2020
5:22 PM EDT