You did a good job, making the story feel just a little bit like it wasn't being told from a human perspective.
You removed the scroll-bar from the interface, and had many pages that MUST be scrolled; I hate that design decision, fortunately Newgrounds didn't go crazy over my use of the arrow-keys to scroll the story though. I literally clicked all over the opening image looking for the start button before I tried the arrow-keys.
Author Comments
This is a short Twine game where you play from the perspective of a woodland protective spirit. I wanted to put something small together thinking about the idea of how nature and man interact.
The game has 3 endings, which you can play through each fairly quickly. The writing style aimed to keep things fairly brief so there isn't mountains of reading to get through!
This was also a good opportunity to refamiliarize myself with the process of uploading a Twine game onto newgrounds and the quirks involved!
The intro image is an edited version of this picture (https://unsplash.com/photos/NQSWvyVRIJk) by Vadimir Sherbakov.
Simple and done right for what it is.
Very interesting, but well done.
I especially enjoyed (my) last ending: invoking the special dual role one must play of hunter & conservator.
Credits & Info
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3.24 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Mar 25, 2020
- 1:21 PM EDT
- Genre
- Adventure - Other
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Daily 4th Place March 27, 2020