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i just like madness

smoothness - family guy level
physiccs - dead
backgrounds - ms paint level
overall animation - TOTALLY BAD

try to add more smoothing it is overall bad tbh

I think it would be wise to zoom the camera out a bit. That way, we can get a better view of the scene, and won't be confused. This will become more important as you get better at animation, since you will need your movements to be clear and readable to the audience. The way things are framed at 0:48 is pretty good, so do more of that. Of course, you can zoom in for certain moments, but my previous statements still stand.