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Gilberto Adventure capitulo 3

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A little adventure of a Android and a Doll

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The captions are a little out of sync with the voiceover, though they probably aren't even necessary since you have a voiceover. Also, the music in the beginning set off a tense or more sinister tone, but the bright backgrounds kind of ruin that. I'm not sure what you were going for, but I recommend using less saturated colors in general. Other than that, everything was clear and readable.

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