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Tanya Caught Daydreaming

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Tanya doesn't know what she's doing, and neither do I tbh lol.


I'm finally animating again it seems, i've been posting alot to twitter and I managed to create this in the process lol.

I love adding sound effects, like alot lol.

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I like this alot! Really great character acting and fun snappy timing!

I think what would make this better is a little more indication at the beginning to sell that she's daydreaming, otherwise this is awesome.

richteeworks responds:

Ooh your right, I never really thought about that to be honest. Maybe I could of added some sound or other visuals to represent that. Thank you, ill consider it, if Theres a next time. which is likely... since she daydreams alot :P

Awesome and cute, but it is too short.

So it's a very nice and simple character moment, and you caught the emotional tone perfectly.
The sound design is alot of fun, but but maybe a simple 1960's batman style "Hey!" speech bubble, or other visual cue showing something hor her to take notice of would help convey the visual progression more.
I think for that lack of obvious stimulus it's actually really well done, and maybe not having that makes it a little more human, as I know I have seen this kind of panic come up.
Thanks for making this

richteeworks responds:

Thank you very much, You break it down nicely. I love that idea of a speech bubble.
your right, that i should of added something to visually cue the text, if thats what you mean, maybe her bouncing a little or something of that sort.
Glad you enjoyed it :)

Very cute!

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Jan 8, 2020
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