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Great effort, weak punchline, but good animation though

The art and animation could be cleaner and a lot of stuff could be more polished, but generally this is pretty fun. I think the main gripes are that you could have made the concept more related to the "problem", however bizarre it may be, cause I didn't see the correlation. Maybe if it was something like "Don't you hate it when you have to carry your crocs on your attached feet?" Or something like that, I don't know. Also, I think that, since your mic quality isn't great, you might wanna refrain from what you did at the end there, because it's super hard to understand. Also, like I said, maybe try cleaning up your art, adding details, visual gags, etc. No pressure, though, I know that takes time and practice. Keep it up!

DoritoAndPringle responds:

thanks for the feedback!, I’m currently trying to improve some of my art, and I threw that last peice of audio together by suggestion from a friend last minute, so I was kinda rushing so I could get this out, and now I see why that isn’t the best strategy, thanks for the recommendations, I’ll try to improve on some stuff!

Credits & Info

Views
395
Votes
70
Score
2.33 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 23, 2019
8:04 PM EST
Hardware
  • K5540 Drawing Tablet
Software
  • Flash 8
  • Vegas Pro 14