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Mini Bar The Fourth Episode

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Gary questions Jimmy about off track betting. Angie is annoyed with a customer.

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And another episodes drops!

Wow, you're getting these done fast.

As I said on BiM, once again, there are some audio balancing problems, with the transition "beeps" blaring when compared to most other sounds, and like before, the background music is so low that we can't really hear it. Again, a bit of sound leveling there would go a long way. Thankfully, voices themselves, the most important parts, are at a good level.

Also, 30 seconds of credits for a 2 1/2 minute film is a touch long. I know it's a fun joke, flashing two title cards for yourself, and perfectly applicable for the film, but perhaps to save time, you could squash them into "Created and assembled by..." to save on time. Then again, it's hilarious to see brickfilmers list themselves as producer, director, writer, voice actor, lighting tech, and animator.

It's nice to see recurring characters, like the "Death" looking guy. It allows us the chance to learn more about them, and if nothing else, see more of their relationship with Jimmy. Also, you're totally making me regret my "leeching of free restaurant wi-fi" days from college. Now I feel bad... (Don't worry, I didn't do it often) Will that guy be returning? It would be cool to follow up on him a few episodes down the road.

Fan78 responds:

Many thanks for the kind words. I am going to be doing something about shortening the credits for sure. Yes the death guy who is in fact a Grim Reaper named Gary will return along with other regulars I am slowly feeding into the series.

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