Its notbad

Well I have to say this was notbad the animation was great the characters are very good and some good sounds added seems to need more scenes and more story to go along with it but overall pretty decent.

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The sound effects really were spot on here! Good detail. It builds up nicely too, though at the end I really was expecting some kind of punchline to end it... it cuts short, a bit. No message. No pun. Nicely done otherwise.

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bretty sboogy