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John and Loonof - Snowy Daze (Part 1)

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A trip up to the mountains will be fun, right?

CREDITS

Written and animated by Tyler

VOICES

John voiced by Noah
Loonof voiced by Tyler
Noah voiced by Noah (forgot to credit him in video)
Sourpuss voiced by Jake
Random Dude voiced by Tyler
Security Guard voiced by Steve
Police Officer voiced by Linda

MUSIC

Earthbound - Winters White - RetroSpecter
Panic! - Mario and Luigi Paper Jam
Big Bang - Mario and Luigi Paper Jam
Mother 3 - Snowman - Nate Ready

SOUND EFFECTS

Jessica Hartell
All Sounds
Jojokiba
SoundMachine
Me

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Even though the art and sound design could use a little work (Along with the animation in general) you managed to keep me entretained for a good eight minutes, which was pretty good, I commend you on taking on such a lenghty animation, I can't wait to see you improve over time, keep it up.

TylerBasham responds:

Thanks!

This has a lot of potential, but there's a lot you need to work on. variety in line thickness, cleaner lines, shading, and more interesting backgrounds were some of the first things that came to mind. also that scribble that goes over the characters head that supposed to be hair drives me bonkers, make the line thinner or make the hair overlap his face, it looks like a 3 year old scribbled on him with marker. whenever you do frame by frame animation it actually looks pretty bouncy and cool so I would focus on getting better with that to make that part shine more, on that note, especially near the beginning there was some lazy ass tweens that made me cringe. so avoid using tweens unless they are necessary. your characters are kind of one note and boring, make them human, for example the ghost is always cynical, the character has to show more then just that or they will be flat and uninteresting. anyways, those were my thoughts, keep try'n and I'll keep an eye out for the next episode.

TylerBasham responds:

Gotcha! Taken into consideration

I enjoy.

Credits & Info

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Score
2.86 / 5.00

Uploaded
Oct 9, 2019
8:35 PM EDT
Genre
Comedy - Original
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