hilarious xd
Author Comments
I made this in order to start teaching myself how to use Adobe Animate. Please leave me all the advice you can!
My review:
+2 Good art
+5 Great Luici voice
+1 UP
-1 Too short
-3 Mario's ass is protruding too hard near the end of the animation, try to keep it clean if you could, please
overall its a 4 star
Alright. You got yourself some good advice.
+2 Good drawing.
+2 Good voice acting.
+1 Decent animation.
-1 Mario lacks a walk cycle.
-1 Low quality laugh track.
Pretty good for a beginner. Keep at it!
Honestly, as far as first attempts go, this was pretty well done!
I've never worked with Adobe to any real extent so I can't really give much advice on the program. I'd say your best bet for advice would be to go to the animation forum, there's probably a few people in there who can give you some tips.
Drzootsuit responds:
I'll have to do that! I had a lot of technical issues, so for my next cartoon I'll def make sure to swing by the actual forum here for help!
Credits & Info
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2.30 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Oct 5, 2019
- 11:25 PM EDT
- Genre
- Comedy - Parody