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Crystal Hearts

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Crystal Hearts is an RPG game containing adult content. In this world, you will lead an orphan boy raised by a farmer, that will be pushed into an adventure in the searching of her missing sister. The world is situated in a Futuristic World dominated by 3 main races. Humans, Ferals and Crystal-Hearted ones.

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unfinished and short has potential wait untill its done though before posting or atleast almost done js

very promising so far

So only the top half of the screen is actually appearing which makes the game quite unplayable.

I saw that you were not a native English speaker, and looking for help with the script. If you're still looking, feel free to contact me directly "Newgrounds has a PM system". I'd be happy to look over your script in my free time.

Is english not your first language? Because the dialogue is a bit clunky. Maybe have a native english speaker look over your script before you code it in.

Also, it's very frustrating to have the character stop moving whenever he starts talking. It makes running through the first and last parts very frustrating.

The jump physics are really off, and I know you don't need them in this demo, but it suggests that you haven't done much in the way of developing all the core mechanics yet.

I do think the overall aesthetic and art style are very distinctive and interesting, and you seem to be very ambitious with where you want to take the project. There's just not a lot of game here yet.

MeltedBubblegum responds:

Mobius, thank you for your thoughts. I’m not a native English speaker. I’m looking for a teammate that could enhance the script.
As for the game, I appreciate your points. I will be improving it based on your comments.