Low IQ
OVERALL: Creative
Well this was creative. I liked that it was 30 minutes, why is the charaters name "Meme"
A slice of life short film about three excited school friends having a thrilling sleepover.
Credits
Animation and Music by SuperCodeman
Voice Talents:
SuperCodeman - Meme
Vyxenah - Phyllis
Allanah Fitzgerald - Bexley
Ollithicus - Dylan Glen
ChelseaWoosh - Sayuri
shonkywonkydonkey - Michael Glen
Ben - Skater
DMA / Daniel Pye - Kids
highsmithdavis / Parker Davis - Mika, Dragon
Low IQ
OVERALL: Creative
Well this was creative. I liked that it was 30 minutes, why is the charaters name "Meme"
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it! I first created Meme-san while I was doodling at camp back in 2016 and thought "Meme" would be a funny name for her. I then created a short animation called "Meme" where she and everyone else would point at the word "Meme". A friend of mine suggested to give her name another pronunciation being "Meh Meh" which was brilliant!
After watching the entire film, I don't think it's fair that you are not getting a proper critique. Especially how you worked very hard on this film. Like 2 years?! That is some commitment!! I'll first point out all the things that are good about it.
1. The pacing of the film is done to perfection.
2. I like how you tried to make it look 3D.
3. Voice acting was excellent.
4. Some parts were ambitious, like the dreaming part.
5. Your commitment.
But of course, I'm not that type of person that thinks that everything is good about it, and those who disagree must burn in a furnace!
I can understand why people aren't really appreciating the work.
First of all, the story is cliche. I don't think a family documentation is worthy of a story: Especially when it is 30 minutes long.
Something that is cliche can translate to boring. This quite possibly means that many people didn't stick around to watch the whole thing.
Characters are okay: I guess people just find it that way.
The film is long but simple: There is not much to say about it honestly.
But don't feel let down, just do the things you enjoy doing!
Good luck
Thank you for your feedback! I'll take it the advice by heart, writing really isn't my strongest point so I should try focus on that.
Nice
Not really my style and I couldn't be bothered to watch it all. Way too long. Maybe I will someday, but not today. I see you got talent though so I'm voting it through the portal at least. Keep it up and good luck.