poor quality not much story sorry if i can understand whats happening i give better rating
This game is made by me, Cartoony Pirate (YT).
this game is made with Wick Editor
'This is a short, non-scary game I made when I was bored. You have to escape the house. There's someone there who awaits you. Who could it be? Go ahead and check it out! Enjoy! I would appreciate a subscriber!
poor quality not much story sorry if i can understand whats happening i give better rating
It is an alright game but there needs to be an objective and there needs to be some explanation. I think that the simple style you used for the ending room and the initial loading screen is a lot better than what you drew. You also need to make it easier to click on things like the boards, you have to click the outline of it. If you color the board in it should allow you to click the whole thing. I think you can do really well.
I will try my best next time. Thank you for your feedback!
yeah sorry but it just wasn't good i couldn't finish the game i only just died,but you said you made this when you were board so i guise its not bad,next time give us a hell of a game,i believe in you.
Thanks for your motivation. I will [ try to ] make a game better than this.
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Sorry but the game mechanics were kind of gummy and made it really difficult to do anything except die, I was unable to see who the someone 'who awaits me' was. Unless it was the red stickman waiting in the chair?
Still not bad for a first game you made while bored.
I think the loading screen looked a lot better than the rest of the game, so maybe sticking with the more simplistic/minimalist style might make it easier to see the different play options that are available to the player.
Also if the red stick man had dialogue of any sort or a reason for being the antagonist (even if a stupid/random one) it might've gone a long way.
The half star is for effort!
Sorry, it took a long time to see this. Well, I did. But anyway, Thanks for your feedback! I will try to do better on my next game