it's a nice lamp

Lamp.

This had potential to be so much more if you just pushed a little further. It was a really strong cold open, the guy peeking around the corner was interesting at first, but then it just kinda..looped.

Its as if you didn't know where to go with it or how to end it, so you just kinda...***phoned it in?****

Hah! Because the dialup.

It was frustrating a little bit, because the atmosphere was good, and those first two sequences look good, and that creepy droning going on in the background is doing all the work for you- because as its intensifying, seeming like its building up to something, everything cops out by throwing a filter around wallboy or stacking the lamp clicking hands over each other.

It felt like a doodle. "Whats this setting do? Oh. It flips my hand graphic horizontally. Whats this do? Oh, it stacks images of the lamp internally atop of each other."

Which is fine. I just want to see what you can do if you exerted more creative energies into things. You're doing things differently, and it looks interesting and cool.

Mission Accomplished! What's next?