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Main thing for me holding this back is the text is too fast and it's not clear what hole it's going into.


Ok, so several things.

1. I actually like the art. It's stylized in a way that makes it feel like a design choice, not a flaw.
2. The positioning/proportions are super off.
3. The sound is too understated to really even do much
4. The animation itself is pretty minimal and jagged, which makes it feel kind of off putting.
5. The text is on the screen for way too short of a time to read.