Well, looking it over, can say the loli vag is a bit "eh". Comes off as a bit lacking compared to the penis detail. But: They are at least quite proportionate.
Really surprised to see a "prostitute" character with a sex drive and needs tbh. Regular females don't even have that 9/10 times, EVEN if they are the main character xD
Dialogue is quite solid too. A few porn tropes, but.
Also possibly some contradictions, unless she has one of those numb cervixes.
Some motions looped a bit awkwardly (mostly head ones) but I didn't see much of any clipping. (I did see some dick clipping though during the climax)
The sperm does kinda go straight through the dick oddly... but nice to see a protagonist that isn't hyper. Though, still quite a lot of dick talk heh.
Overall style and aesthetic is nice though.