I actually love the concept of this. It's a nice unique fetish, that'd I encourage you to do more of. The faces were very satisfying, but what threw it off was probably the penis size, it seems to have stopped you've from making this feel more immersive. The ear appears to clip and which makes the camera pick up on the fact that it's not actually in her ear, or at least makes it look like it more behind her ear, than actually in it. The only other thing I'd point out is that the voice needs to be turned up a bit. I'd like to see an updated version of the scene or at least more of this fetish. If you could make it happen you'd be a god.