Minimalist and impresive shortfilm!
My Exam Project I made for my class in Motion Graphics!
I spent 2 months making this from the ground up!
The story in this might not be the best, but I'm very pleased with the visual style and compositions!
I hope you like it!
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Minimalist and impresive shortfilm!
Ur so skilled omg this is amazing
Thank you (*˘︶˘*).｡*♡
oh this rocks!!!!
The walking motions, for example when the one guy goes towards the jeep, looks a bit more like hovering than actual movement, and the same impression comes across with things like lip sync too, it's not really fluent, but I guess that might be the style. Does work, just feel like it could be a bit more realistic.
I love the atmosphere though, both the background ambience, and the lighting, and the buil-up... feels good. Not the most complex or emotional sequence but a pretty feelgood one, and qith a pretty unique style. It's all in the moment.
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this has got a very animal crossing feel to it in a good way. Some of your walk animations could use adjustment in speed, but I'm really digging the motif and style of this. The music feels oddly distant, and there are a few moments of empty space that last a bit too long for what you're trying to accomplish emotionally. but for a class, this is excellent work. I'd love to see more segments in this style.
Thank you so much for such an in depth review! The feedback is very much appriciated!