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Hey there! This is the first animation that I've posted. It's not much, but I'm quite happy with how it turned out.

I made this in Adobe Animate, but I'm going to switch over to Toon Boom Harmony soon.

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I think you did a good job. The inanimate objects and sounds are akin to PIXAR's first animation. I feel like the SFX was too overwhelming, and don't feel created by the objects. In the future, I'd recommend making them (the SFX) more subtle. *still very impressive, thanks for the share!

i think this is good

It looks good! I'm looking forward to seeing your first full length animation.

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Not bad for a first time! However, since i am judging this as a comedy, I would say that it isn't really that funny in my opinion. It is a nice test run on what you can do with adobe animate, but the movies that gave me a lasting impression are the ones that offer more than just good visuals, like quirky jokes or excellent storytelling. Other than that, the animation was spot on and not "floaty" while the characters/objects are simple yet appealing, unlike the other movies in the portal. Good job!

TacoAnimations responds:

Yeah, this was definitely more of a test run than anything. I agree that the humor is definitely the weakest part of this. To be honest, I wasn't sure what kind of genre it fit in, so I just went with comedy.

I really appreciate the feedback, thanks!

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2.88 / 5.00

May 18, 2019
3:45 PM EDT
Comedy - Original