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Good Job, son!
Fantastic work all around!
Very cute design for both characters, beautiful backgrounds, pretty good voice acting and a cute short story to top it all of.
Just a few notes from me: the animation felt a little bit stiff, choppy at times and very, very slow; there are way to many pauses between scenes and dialogues.
In my opinion you should try to make things move a little faster a cut down on the pauses.
Still, these are minor picks on a overall fantastic work!
Thanks, and yeah I've come to be told that this one is a bit slow... I will try and make my animations have more movement in the future! I learned a lot from this one!!!