I liked this. The art and animation were surprisingly nice and I found the story actually interesting. I can see you like doing this.
Like I said, the art was nice, but your character felt a bit simple-looking. The thicc lines and lack of detail kinda stood out, considering the rest of the art was a lot more interesting. I especially liked the visualization of the Italian place, the creeping fear, etc. I feel like the part where everyone's reactions were described was kinda slow, because you didn't show their dishes. I guess it was necessary, but I don't know, maybe you could have shortened it a little bit. It started being too much on the middle sister part.
The narration was pretty charming. I feel like it sounds like a lot of storytime animators, but I couldn't help but enjoy it, your tone is so soothing and nice. Not monotone though. Liked how you occasionally rhymed and did things to make it more fun.
Overall, this was nice and more than I expect from storytime, though j haven't seen much storytime tbh. Keep it up, and mainly work on your art, though it's already pretty good. Maybe leave some stuff out as mentioned earlier, but visual presentation is nice overall.