Hard

Very unique

Well this was pretty good and unique along with the music and the strong visuals you really made it enjoyble you really have something here and think you could make this run as a long running series of sorts, anyways really awsome work here would love to see more.

~X~

A pretty intriguing universe right from the get-go! Gecko leaders and all. I like the design, the ominous music, the story itself... turned into something more than this it'd be pretty awesome. Ending too: just perfect.

The title, though, seems to lack emphasis. It feels like it could introduce this in a much more powerful way. Maybe it's just the case, but maybe that it just doesn't really capture the story. Which is great. The way that Lizardman's dressed he seems a bit like Piccolo btw. :)

Good stuff. Love the mood.

-cd-

Fantastic stuff! I'd love to help you turn this into a screenplay if you are interested. Please get back to me when you can. Thanks.

Hm... that credits list is concerning, remember you should have the rights to everything you use here.
But anyway, this was... interesting. Not a fan of the old PC-game looking backgrounds, but the character art was nice. The plot kind of confused me though, and the twist end... I... don't get it.
But, I was entertained, and the music choices were nice