shut up and take my fucking money

There isn't much here to really incite the viewer to look at your game. This is just a bland excuse to drive them to your kickstarter page.

C'mon, you can do better then this. Use original animation next time, and tell everything the viewer needs to know from the visuals alone. This isn't really explaining much, honestly.

Wow! This game looks very intriguing and impressive, I can tell that you put a lot of hard work into it! ^_^
The gameplay looks interesting and the pixel art is designed very well too, but does this game have any RPG elements? Or, like options to use different weapons and/or attacks?
That'd be cool. But it'd be even cooler to see you upload the game on here so everyone can play it and give you feedback on it :) I would like to check it out ;^)

Keep up the good work! You're currently working on a very cool project that has a lot of potential and which could become like the next big game ( or something like that ) :3

I LOVE IT. The design and the music, the overall landscape is wonderful! I was actually thinking of making a game myself, but don't quite have any backgrounds to use without going to google. Could we message privately?