Room for improvement
I can see the potential humor out of a series like this, but I think the animation and the sound quality leave much to be desired.
Author Comments
Yeah, okay, well this is a cat, and a cartoon, and I think it's pretty funny... but what the hell do I know... so if you hate me because of this cartoon, let me know, but if you like it be all like Word man, it's awsome! Cause I have a lot more ideas and I'd like to make a series... but not if everyone hates me... so let me know... ROCK!
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i would say if a had a cat like that i would put him down
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dude what is wrong with u, a stupid and crippeld cat thats youst lame think if you were stumpy huh what would you feel so thats why i say go fuck yourself or smt friggin animal heater u probaply throw animals on the streets to friggin douche
Not funny. at all.
Crippled and tortured animals just aren't funny.
Alright.
I've seen worse. I won't dock points for the story, I mean think about what his owner would think when she got home. OH MY GOD! ha ha ha ha.
But the sound quality was crap. You don't need to be touching the mike if you're screaming. Also, there was very little animation to stumpy. And the 20 second scene showing him, then the trash, him, then the trash, was a little overplayed.
The flash overall could be improved greatly. I could see this as being made as only a joke, or in a week. Tops. Or maybe as practice. I've seen much worse flashes. I think you shot low, and achieved low. But, you got a slightly funny story out. For your comedy, i praise you. Just work on your animation skills. Writing's fine.
