UnTown has become a bit of a collaborative effort, so now I'm just experimenting what else I can do on my own. decided to make this more lighthearted wacky new series, and first to show is Karrot out of the many TicPunch character shorts! More will be coming hopefully soon.
This is actually the second short of the series, but if you want to see how it all began, check out the first one that's exclusive on my Youtube! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WVSJv4IuBUo
Watch the life of Karrot Ranchers, and her upbringing to join TicPunch! Feedback is appreciated.
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Karrot - https://twitter.com/AlreadyIsh
Spring - https://www.deviantart.com/nitrogoblin
Director Deen - https://www.youtube.com/user/PlainOlYogurt
Bryson- PallidCrest
Nice work
So this was a nice movie submission some vibrant characters here some cute voices and some fresh artwork and great backrounds there could be some subtitles added for some extra measures here but overall this was pretty good stuff you have some nice animation here
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some added subtitles would be nice for this
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Still think this is really Awesome xD
I like the laid back pace of this, simple fun and easy to follow, though it all ends without any major event... feels like some real crisis could be a highlight, or at least an end that really leaves you hanging, but as it is it kinda fades away and promises to fade in more fiercely next time...
Main VA sounds a lot like the girl in Wonder Ho! too, wonder if there might be any link there... good voicing, simple but functional animation, and good script, just a bit eventless when it's all over. Looking forward to the next one.
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You got something going here. The narrative, voice acting, and simplistic character designs fit the wackiness of this series, so that's a plus. Some things that I found offputting though were the backgrounds and character animations with how the characters suddenly jump from one pose into the next. The dialogue animations too could use a few in-betweens as well to help bring more fluidity to how the characters move. The backgrounds especially could use some touching up as well as some objects like the trees and the camp's buildings appear flat in relation to their surroundings. Some interior shots in the latter half seemed inconsistent compared to the previously hand-drawn backgrounds. Additionally, the intro music, although lighthearted and joyful, felt overwhelming on the ears. Might be how it's mixed, but a lot of the instrumentation sounds like it's having a war with itself. Best to leave some breathing room for other instruments to lead the song to make it a recognizable ditty.
Despite what I said, it's not a bad start! You've pretty much laid out the essentials and have a visual blueprint of what your series will be like. I would heavily suggest adding more frames of animations to character movements and polish the backgrounds to bring more life to things going forward.
