I confess it took me 2 1/2 times through the loop to realise! Its all good. I find the sound you chose for putting the window in funny, as if you could just click it in! The body language is GREAT. The more I look at it, as I type this, the more I see and I just clicked up from 3.5 to 4!
Subtle detail- leaning back carrying glass. The black eye... its all there, with perfectly timed sound etc.