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The World

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Pain, Sorrow, Selfishness, Pride are taking over the world. Do you love it?


Background and Character designed in: Photoshop


Animation: After Effects

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As a short test, this worked well - the rain, backgrounds and lighting were well done, but the animation and story could be improved for the future.

OSART responds:

Absolutely!!! I absolutely feel you man, I look back on it, and Im like man this could be improved here, there, and there haha. Thanks for the watch and comment appreciated.

Nice after effects rain, but besides that animation was lacking and the voice over was so quite you needed to put subtitles in. I feel like this could be fleshed out more, but there's a chance that the creator only wanted to promote a message rather than tell a story. However, if you wanted to tell a story there's not enough here to tell one.

OSART responds:

Noted. Thanks for the tips and everything. You are on point. Definitely wanted the message to be put out there and I can be more strategic in delivery visually! :D Awesome

Credits & Info

Views
706
Faves:
4
Votes
84
Score
3.25 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 17, 2019
2:17 PM EST
Genre
Drama