After FINALLY finishing it I will give you one good kudo point and that was the save feature, at least for me, was rock solid. It was waiting there for me after almost A MONTH away, so good on you.
As for the rest...
THIS. GAME. IS. TO. FUCKING. LONG.
The levels of 50 shades of grey BS in this thing is absurd. I want to walk up to half the character with a rusty tire iron and wipe the self satified smirks off each of their faces and having a An Illumet Priest show up and put an end to this would have been far, FAR more satisfying to read than your little BSDM fan fic. This is not a Domination game, THIS IS A STOCKHOLM SYNDROME SIMULATOR.
Any sexual excitement was drained from the experience due to the very chore of ending this abysmal display. I only finished because I'm goddamned completionist, not because I secretly enjoyed it.
I'm giving you a 3.5 on technical grounds as it was structurally sound, well coded, and did offer some nice touches that show care was put into creating this.
Just. ...MAN. TO FUCKING LONG... FUUUUCK... UGH.