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On the Edge of Absolve

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Fellow Feeling - Porter Robinson unofficial music video!

I made this animation independently across the past three months! Be sure to check out my other work as well!

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I wish she'd really explain...

The animation's beautiful. It builds up so masterfully, and emotionally, but then the bomb drops and it looses a bit of that structure. I'm not sure I appreciate the life footage, I'm not sure all the violin strings are in sync, maybe the music's partly at fault for the parts that don't feel perfect, but damn... it's still super emotional. I feel like it's a step from perfection, but it's definitely going in my favorites either way. It builds up and breaks down...

-cd-

lpart responds:

I'm very happy you enjoyed it! I plan to make things more polished and clear in the future, and there will be many more emotional pieces to come!

I think your set up was really good. I was getting chills as she stood on the hilltop. but after the bomb dropped you kinda lost me. it went on for far too long and all the tension was gone by the time it even hit. the animation could use some improvement but overall I think it was fine. I think this would be a great thing to come back to in a year or so once you've improved.

I guess I miss the background of the plot. The tension and atmosphere are well built. I think you used 3D software right? or I am wrong, because it does not seem to use the full advantage of 3D softs (like parallax , swivel)
in general nice job and have the cinema grip.

lpart responds:

thanks! Yeah the story is a a hard read and it was made in 3D

WHY SO SADDDDDDDDD

i find the animation to be a little bit bad and as a random 15 year old surfing down for porn and shit, i feel like there is a meaning to this and i cant seem to find it since im too horny to do so.
ill come back another day though. i really didnt like the violin turning into an entire dubstep station but cool :P. **BY LOGIC.. HER EYES WOULD HAVE COMPLETELY LODGED OFF HER EYE SOCKETS, THE SKIN WOULD HAVE PEELED TO SUCH EXTENTANT THAT SHE WOULD LOOK LIKE ONE OF THOSE ART MUSEUM THINGS IN ENGLAND IF IM RIGHT, 3RD DEGREE BURNS ALL DOWN HER BODY, REEKING IN ATOMIC WASTE SO BADLY THAT SHE WOULD BE A LITERAL SKUNK WITH BURNED SKIN AND THIRD DEGREE BURNS ALL OVER HERSELF AND ALSO WILL GIVE CANCER TO EVERYONE... did i forget something? SHE WILL BE DEAD.**
-Sincerely,
Random Indian Child

lpart responds:

Im glad you enjoyed either way xD

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Uploaded
Jan 13, 2019
1:27 AM EST
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  • Daily 3rd Place January 14, 2019