An interesting choice. The voices were comically accented to the point where it was pretty annoying. Obvious that it was one or two voices as well. The action was pretty nice though, I really liked that one guy getting his fingers blown off. Some decent strategy too, for all the 3 enemies that got taken down. There were some inconsistencies. Namely, you made a disorienting choice with the bounty hunter coming into the room from the left after running up the stairs. Then there's the fact that the (I assume) prostitute just vanished. And lastly, the shot the bounty hunter fired ricocheted off the lamp and didn't hit the gringo, making it a pointlessly distracting cut that makes you think the fugitive should have been hit. It's just misleading. I liked how he threw a tortilla though. That's an accurate Mexican if I've ever seen one.
Overall had some nice action but the voice acting and spatial continuity weren't great. It's not your best work.