OK
It has a nice animation. You could try to put a loop on the music so that it doesn't run out too quickly. Also try to put a start menu up so that viewers can control when they want to start the movie.
Author Comments
I Finally found a Mp3 compressor, so that was that for file size. This is a longer and smaller file than my last. #2 will be made if this gets good votes and honest reviews.
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For the ones that voted this movie poorly i feel bad. Most of the work on NG's isnt all that great, some people put in the work and ability,others just know Flash very well. Since a movie doesnt have a good loading screen, play button and is a larger file. People seem to vote low on it, why?. VOTE ON THE MOVIE ITSELF. Thanks For Your Time And Enjoy The Flash. ~Bukustakies
nice and original
i really like ur style, except yopu could put a little more effort into the smoothness - i don't think it needs colour, and i like your choice in music (Tekken anyone?)
Make more!
colour
Sure I think it was good and all but I think it needs colour in it, it looks too bland with just the white backround with the black lines doing everything. I really think you could raise votes by using colour.
indifferent
"guns and cigarettes and the military..yea wicked sweet man, sweet." thats probably what i would say if i really liked the film. unfortunatly i did not like the whole plot, did not seem too original or different. I did think it was all very stylish though and you draw cars very well too on a lighter note.
-drew
Its ok
I know you probaly have done alot to this movie (or not) but seriously get more into flash and you will get far, since i guess this all is mouse/handdrawn..