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okay umm ive seen both the first and second episodes and lemme say that this just comes off really amatuer i mean the dialogue in the first one was stuff i could have came up with when i was 7 but i let that slide u had a pratty good story goin on so i watched the second one and u havent done anything original, some of the music doesnt fit in with the kind of story ur going for and ur movie just looks like a lot of other dragonball z rip offs now. basically a lack of originality has stopped this movie from being as good as it could be.

unoriginal copy

Youre a cheap guy, you messed up ur FANTASTIC orayux story line by making a fkin cheap copy of DBZ out of it, hey, By myself, i draw comics(since 4). And ive made some ideas up of other work, but ive always renounsed to it afterwards.
Dude, u have to make your stuff more original.
I would have gived to this a 3 if the drawings and the music wouldnt have been so nice.
Mail me to mikman89@hotmail.com if u will respond to this.

dat was hot doggy

wow i really liked dat n i loved da music dat was hot 2 me n i like da way u mixed dbz stle in der i dnk dis will be a great series

ya

Nice and all.. but what kind of music is that for someone who just got pissed off and charged up? the music made me happy. not in a fighting mood. heh

Orayu X - The Orayu Sword

Spectri26, I think you have a good idea on your hands. The one big problem I see here is that you haven't really had a good decision about the music you choose. Please look into more of a film music type of music for the moment. The more you make it look like an orginal movie that you would think was made for the theaters the more points smart people will award. Keep up the work, an I suggest for your next movie look up some film music, on your p2p program, from movies that have the idea you have or just good music ingeneral.