If this was made to be intentionally bad, than you succeeded.
More like... belongs in the trash.
Was this humor? Or meant to weird me out? It has had so little impact my only reaction is to question why it even exists....
It's a little hard top for feedback on things like this since a lot of the things I would normally be considered problems are actually stylistic elements. I think the most helpful feedback I could offer is that usually if audio is distorted it sells a joke better to distort the subtitles as well
What a twist.