Really wonderful and evocative

nice work.

Really nice work! the only issue was the narration, it was a bit muffled. Also This would have been much better if it was smoothly animated in silenced instead.

Still great little tale, with cute simple characters and nice aesthetic. Keep it up!

Really nice work

I love the "STORY" here was really nice there is some good "DEPTH" to this, I am loving the black and white on this one, the narrating and then the music was really good, you have some really nice film here and the black and white was really awsome so nice work here on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
no changes on this one it was fantastic work.

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Very well done animation, I really dig your art style, as well, the narrative was pretty good but theirs always room for improvement. I wish this animation was a bit longer. it felt as if it captivated me but was done to fast and left me wishing for more. But, Very well done even doing that itself. However, I want to bring up around 1:35- 1:42ish the Cresent moon to waxing moon changes were nice, but remember for that realistic effect of a moon their should never be stars in front of the moon. The moon is always there even if not being reflected by light so you could never see the stars behind the moon along side having them in front of the moon.

Thank you for this fantastic animation, Hope to see more from you soon! Keep up the awesome work!