If I'm honest, there isn't really anything for me to critique (considering that I'm shit at criticising stuff) but goddammit, I'm gonna try. I did notice that the singing did seem more clear around the end of the song which kinda put me off a little bit (I'm not going to let that affect the score I'm giving though). I can't say much about the animation because I know nothing about animation.

all in all, good and good in my opinion

i kinda liket the style O3o

Good story-line, above average quality of animation, I hope that in your series the animation style will be even more fluent and improved, and a very good sense of humor.

Better then the average cartoon show on TV, I hope to see an interesting development in the characters.

Felt pretty cookie cutter, but it enjoyed it alot

all as @JUK3BOY says